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Ode to 1 a.m.

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You have a tendency of falling asleep on me,
I didn't exactly expect it
I can almost see dreams passing under the lids of your eyes
So, just once, I'll sing you a lullaby.

I'll stitch it out of leather,
like the jacket you love to steal.

I'll weave it out of light,
like when I saw the comets fly above your head
(I don't think you noticed)

I'll sew it out of memories,
Just so it seems real.


Seems that you liked it.
You smiled when it was done.

Later tonight, I'll slit my wrist,
and write down your song
with the ink that flows
through my veins and through my soul
When I can't think of what I want to say to people, I write. I've never been unable to write, it just comes out when I need it to.
© 2012 - 2024 thousandthwind
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QuirkyCuriousBex's avatar
I can almost see dreams passing under the lids of your eyes

I think it probably would sound better if you said "under your eyelids"; "under the lids of your eyes" is a bit... needlessly wordy.Sweat Drop revamp 

But I really like this. That last stanza... :wow: