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Literature at its best :D by ShelleyAnderson

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You have a tendency of falling asleep on me,
I didn't exactly expect it
I can almost see dreams passing under the lids of your eyes
So, just once, I'll sing you a lullaby.

I'll stitch it out of leather,
like the jacket you love to steal.

I'll weave it out of light,
like when I saw the comets fly above your head
(I don't think you noticed)

I'll sew it out of memories,
Just so it seems real.


Seems that you liked it.
You smiled when it was done.

Later tonight, I'll slit my wrist,
and write down your song
with the ink that flows
through my veins and through my soul
When I can't think of what I want to say to people, I write. I've never been unable to write, it just comes out when I need it to.
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TheEmptyChest Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014
I can almost see dreams passing under the lids of your eyes

I think it probably would sound better if you said "under your eyelids"; "under the lids of your eyes" is a bit... needlessly wordy.Sweat Drop revamp 

But I really like this. That last stanza... :wow:
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thousandthwind Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014
Thank you so much, I haven't been able to post, but I promise I've been working on some big stuff as I've been spending my time in Italy, so eventually I will post something
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TheEmptyChest Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014
Awesome! Can't wait to see it! And of course, you're welcome.
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ShelleyAnderson Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Student General Artist
This is gorgeous, really, I don't know who you are but you need to know just how beautiful this was :heart:
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thousandthwind Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012
Thanks so much, it means a lot.
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ShelleyAnderson Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2012  Student General Artist
You are very welcome ^_^
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
asdfghjklllkjuyt how are you so beautiful
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thousandthwind Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012
only in writing.
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intricately-ordinary Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
well, that's a quality few can attain.
(and from what I've seen, you are a beautiful person inside, too)
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thousandthwind Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012
you haven't seen everything. Beauty isn't exactly my forte.
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